CRITIQUE THE COLOURING AND CHOOSE EITHER ONE OR TWO!!!!!!!! And if I should colour the white of the wings on the wand.
Drawing Number 135 Drawn June 15-22, 2007
CHOOSE BETWEEN VERSION ONE AND VERSION TWO FOR ME. I'm colouring the pic and had a few copies so just started colouring on both and then I liked both, but not the wands. One is a darker coloured one, the second a more pastel kind of look to it. Both wands are horrendous (and have been edited on the final in how they look)
In this one I messed up nothing too much. I've still changed the wand on the final, these are the copies from before fixing it up.
SO TELL ME WHICH COLOURING IS BETTTTTER!!! ONE OR TWOOOOOO!
I like this colouring a little more, maybey add a light grey or bloue to shade the wings on the wand, I think will look nice^^ (Man I find it so hard to be critical about things sorry >x<; )
Ah, I've been sitting here for awhile now, wondering which version I like better. Hm, I seem to like version 2.0 better. Because it is light and pretty, happy, bouncy, like a fairy. It just seems some shading. I'm not good at critiquing, sorry. ^////^"
I like this one best!! The hair and wand colour are a lot more softer. Although I think the skin colour should be slightly darker to make it stand out from the background, and I liked the lip colour in version 1.0. And I agree with ~bemani247 about adding a light grey to shade the wings. It's sooooo cute coloured!! I love it!
So the wand colour is fine. >> I almost thought it horrible. I was going for a pink like Sakura on Card Captor Sakura and thought adding in yellow and a light orange would make glowy effect and it turned it peach, so no matter what other pink I coloured it in with....it remained as you see it. So the lip colour's fine? T^T Wasn't too sure about that. Ooooooh, grey....wuld that lok fine with all the pretty colours I have on it? What about a light blue or something? Althought the yellow and black on the wand might distract from it, or enchance it? *QUESTTTTTTTTTTTTION MARKS ABOVE HEAD. God, the scanner like emptied her body of her skin colouring. XDXDXD But okay, withina week, I will have j00r piccu completely coloured. And I say a week cuz I got my wisdom teeth pulled. ahahahahaha. Finally.
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up* Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could. Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly. Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
I was asking someone else about the light blue. I didn't know if grey would seem random althought the wand had yellow and black in it. I gotta darken her skin I know that. What about the lips? I wasn't sure it looked okay on either of them and am tempted to leave alone. So the peach wand looks fine? XD Tis okay, I find it hard to be critical unless someones asks, then I like continously study their pic til I notice what I don't like. ^^ But you've helped me, so you are of help to me.
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up* Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could. Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly. Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
You mean like shading in for colours, background, highlights? I'm not good at backgrounds, in fact they're usually nonexistent. lawl. I was trying to think of a way to highlight the clothes and hair, but the way I drew it was more anime like than actual clothes with lines in it to be shaded. T___T Dun worry, your critque was fine.
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up* Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could. Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly. Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
yaaaay!!! You really like it *glomps continuously on your face* YOU'RE SO AWESSSOOOOOOME
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up* Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could. Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly. Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
Hmm... I'm not sure about a light blue for the wings....because the hair and eyes are blue, so it might be a little too much blue...or it might add to it... I think it would depend on the colour. I really love how the blue hair brings out the colour in the eyes.
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It's sooooo cute coloured!! I love it!
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up*
Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could.
Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly.
Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up*
Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could.
Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly.
Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up*
Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could.
Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly.
Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
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Corky: Don't worry, I'll catch you *holds arms up*
Anna: *climbing tree*O yeah, like you could.
Corky: I'm telling you,*butterfly flits by, eyes follow*oh, look, a butterfly.
Anna: WTFH?! You were going to catch me! Do not tell me you just walked away!
I really love how the blue hair brings out the colour in the eyes.
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